It is generally discussed among the public that the extreme sports such as skydiving and rock-climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
give reasons for your explanations and use any relevant examples from your own life.
While there are a section of people, who believe in unlimited access to some extreme sports, mainly skydiving and rock-climbing, others thinks the opposite and want a ban on such activities. In my view I partly in favor of second view and give my view point as under in this essay.
Adventure is the most thrilling factor, which inspires few to engage themselves in such a dangerous sports. They want to do something new and try various risk involving sports games such as skydiving and rock-climbing. To them thrill is the most imperative, they want to explore the unpredictable nature of life. For example one of my friend Shaun goes to rock-climbing camp at Shimla each year. This gives him a chance to test his potential in the shiver cold conditions, in addition to some tasks like climbing the rock. There are some professional wrestlers who make millions of money by performing numerous and dangerous wrestling activity. So money can also be considered as one of the key driver behind their pursuit of such sports.
On the other hand, many harmful sports like above can prove to be life-killing one some occasion. However, restricting to them can be infringement of right to individual. Furthermore, as the famous adage says " forbidden fruit is always the sweeter". People especially adolescents can be more attracted to such sports. Although by monitoring the games and implementing some strict rules regarding them by government can prove to be an apparent and deem solution.
In conclusion dangerous such as skydiving and rock-climbing has become the talk of town in recent years and we can not force anyone to abort their urge of practicing it. Therefore I disagree with banning it partly and supp[ort the argument to make some repudiate laws in order to protect the life of such sports aspirators.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ect the life of such sports aspirators.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00655737705 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92054782019 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2065760308 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158030569138 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507257045254 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373532520611 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931439462654 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311515608971 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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