It is a common perception of the general public that sports involving danger to one's life should be discouraged. Some are of the school of thought that activities such as skydiving and rock-climbing involves high risk and should be banned. In my opinion, many people enjoy thee sports and banning them will dampen their spirits. In addition, if done with proper care and safety these activities are very enjoyable.
To begin with, initially many people died part-taking in such activities as not much importance was given to safety. However, times have now changed and people have to undergo various medical tests and life insurance is made compulsory before under taking any adventure. In addition, we now have special instructors who is an expert in their area and they provide special training and instructions to the participants. For example, when I signed up for rock climbing, the organizers provided all the equipment's along with a first aid kit in case of injuries. We were also given a map and rule sheet.
Moreover, many enjoy the thrill of such sports and like to have an "once in a lifetime experience!". They like to get away from their monotonous life and prefer to indulge themselves in some adventurous activities. Furthermore, some look for means to address their issues, for instance, those who are afraid of heights may take up skydiving to get over their fears and become more confident. Thus, participating in such activities not only makes you physically fit but is only beneficial to mental health.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate that safety and well being of the people should be vital. Extensive research should be done and one should be aware of all the safety procedures and measures to be undertaken in case of an accident. In the end, you must shed all your inhibitions and just enjoy the sport!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
It is a common perception of the general public that sports involving danger to ones li...
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Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... public that sports involving danger to ones life should be discouraged. Some are of...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...dition, we now have special instructors who are expertise in their area and they provid...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... thrill of such sports and like to have a 'once in a life time experience!&a...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...orts and like to have a 'once in a life time experience!'. They like to get awa...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...e who are afraid of heights may take up sky diving to get over their fears and become more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94871794872 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80994523825 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7843331486 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211449513747 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654570231093 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593365086468 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124666809252 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537315241572 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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