Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to the advertisement of a job opening. Being a recent graduate in sports management I am looking out for similar opportunities to gain some work experience.
Let me explain in detail. Although, I am aware that this is an unpaid job I would like to take it up. I have no work experience in the said area and this seems like a good opportunity to make some connections and gather some field knowledge. Also, since the event will be held very close to my house, I will not have a problem arriving early at the venue. I need this exposure before taking up any permanent job.
Additionally, I would like to know if there will be any uniform provided by the company. If not, could you please let me know the dress code I need to follow. Also, I would like to know what are the timings and how long will the event be held since, I wont schedule any appointments during that time.
Lastly, please let me know if you need any more information from my side. I would be happy to help.
Looking forward to a positive reply.
Kind Regards,
Mary Ann
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...xperience. Let me explain in detail. Although, I am aware that this is an unpaid job ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47290640394 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56718786646 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610837438424 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4700222075 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8571428571 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273019523482 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875497316534 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985494349297 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122183556226 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104172983885 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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