Is it important for teenagers to play in team sports?
Notes
Write about :
1.Friendship
2.Challenge
3….Your own idea
TASK
There is no doubt that sports play a fundamental part in our lives. Some people believe that it is more beneficial for young people to take part in sports which are played in teams. I personally agree with this opinion because of a number of benefits for those who play.
Firstly, there is a compelling evidence that adolescents find it easier to form friendships when they play sports together because they have more time to understand and share their common interests. As a result, team sports provide players with the opportunity to develop a sense of unity, friendship, and sportsmanship among teammates, which can really add value to people's lives by making them feel a part of something.
Furthermore, team sports teach players valuable lessons such as determination and patience to overcome any setbacks they may face, which is certainly paramount for the younger generation. Take football, as an example. Those who play this game are taught to work effectively in a team environment and even sacrifice for the sake of their team.
Finally, engaging sports which are played in teams offer players the opportunity to develop interpersonal skills, like cooperation and communication skills. Needless to say, it will not only help people in their day-to-day social interactions but also benefit them in their workplace..
Taking these points into consideration, I believe that it is crucial for adolescents to participate in team sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, so, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21794871795 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92973263854 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4864832734 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214340067901 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821932805738 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424063955554 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991894477248 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552860543706 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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