Junk food advertising has a harmful effect on society and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although not a new phenomenon, but the consumption of unhealthy food in our day-to-day lives is on a rise. These cusine chains are utilising this opportunity and increasing their marketing budgets to attract a higher number of customers. In my opinion this is incorrect and will have an detrimental effect on the community as a whole in the long run. In this essay, I will highlight two notable reasons to discourage such faulty advertisments.
The predominant factor supporting the restriction of marketing these establishments is regarding the quality of what they serve. The low cost of raw materials and the massive volume of production at these institution drastically impact the quality of what they serve to the buyers. Large fast food chains such as burger king, for instance, create approximately 5000 burgers each hour at just one franchise. This, indeed causes a decline in quality checks to maintain the high demand.
The inconsistent mode of production only exacerbates the second cause of worry which is of personal health. These kind of foods lead to obesity and other major physical issues such as high blood pressure. The ingredients used in their preparation has a high lever of fattening particles that not only causes weight gain, but also increase the chances for heart failure due to congestion. A good example of this is of a single box of french fries, which contains more than 700 calories. How can consuming is be good for your body?
In conclusion, however, there is a growing market for such a junk filled diet, it will have an adverse effect on the health of the consumer. In my view, as a society we should not encourage this fast food trend and untimetly try to move towards a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93150684932 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84250701406 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623287671233 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7226872898 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979562957601 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293824091703 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302587062812 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616063623154 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408946024406 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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