Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
Juvenile crime is increasingly drastically all over the world. There are many reasons for the increase of crime rate in teenagers. One of them being both parents working, which means that parents doesn't care on what their child is doing. The second reason is increasing difference between poor and rich and there are many more. Its both parent and governments responsibility to tackle and reduce the crime rate in youth.
Firstly, If both the parents are working, they may have a lot of work pressure and very less time for their leisure hence can not concentrate on their child's well-being. Since such parents who have no time pass on their cards to child to buy whatever they need and doesn't even track of what the child is buying. For instance, there was a recent case reported by the crime world news paper where a similar case has happened, where this youth got habited to drugs and started to rob from friends to fill his desire of having drugs and their parents do not know about this until the police informed them.
The other reason being difference between rich and poor where the rich getting more richer and poor getting more poorer. The juveniles from poor community being attracted by gadgets used by rich people are stabbing people on streets, shoplifting or involved in others crimes in order to earn money and procuring such wealthier goods. A survey conducted by times now in Sep 2019 had revealed that most of the youth performing crime were involved in robbery because they wanted to buy good smart phones.
In conclusion, since the crime rate is increasing, it is the responsibility of parents to monitor their children and In addition, the government should bring stringent laws so that the teenagers involving in crime are afraid of doing so.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83881578947 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43653649542 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2024661496 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.583333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189922998794 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826805670407 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652054572091 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111541662591 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064755354492 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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