Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams always achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the success is more related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
Sports, by nature, involve intense competition and people often debate the factors which determine the outcome of a sports match. Some hold the opinion that supreme physical strength enables one to win, while others believe that only those who possess a winning attitude can be successful. In my opinion, physical abilities are as important as the right mindset.
On the one hand, superior strength gives athletes an edge over their peers when it comes to physical confrontation. For example, in a sport like football, players have to physically confront their competitors, and hence those who demonstrate greater physical strength are more likely to win / succeed. Boxing is another game that requires immense physical strength and endurance. A stronger boxer naturally has faster punching speed and higher punching power, which enable them to easily knock down their rivals. Physical strength also imparts higher levels of endurance which is essential for athletes to maintain their performance for a long time. This is important in almost all games because players who get tired easily cannot achieve much regardless of their talent.
On the other hand, a winning mindset is also of great importance. To be specific, in a fierce competition, the player who is falling behind will have high levels of stress. If they cannot maintain the positive attitude, the immense pressure will overtake their natural ability to perform and they will lose even if they possess excellent stamina. This is because our mind controls our body and once the mind accepts defeat, the body can achieve hardly anything.
In conclusion, fitness and spirit both play significant roles in ensuring success in sports. A strong body improves an athlete’s ability to confront physically, while an optimistic mindset and intense craving for success ultimately enable them to win.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'achieve'.
Suggestion: hardly achieve
...e the mind accepts defeat, the body can achieve hardly anything. In conclusion, fitness and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33673469388 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61754625664 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3720542551 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927091634998 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314159362465 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307320098469 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634451493067 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402910065833 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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