Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
Criminal activities are skyrocketed in past few years around the world. However, the most surprising fact is that young people are the prominent culprit of these cases. There are plenty of reasons for this but the topmost are unemployment, drugs and lack of affection from family.
Drugs are the root cause of this problem. Some youth did take drugs like cocaine or other at an early stage of life, which they got free from drug peddlers. But, when they got addicted to it the dealer try to charge them higher price and to satisfy their needs teenagers try to rob other people or started to steal money from stores. These small little things took a shape of huge crime when they grew up and they became criminals. In addition to it, another reason for this scenario is unemployment, when a young adult has no job it will become hard for them to support themself and their family financially. Adding in to it, usually when they compare their situation with rich friend they started to feel embarssed and they start looking for wrong ways to bridge the gap. They started with small crimes but the older they became they go deeper in to the criminal world.
Except this financial aspect, one emotional value also contribute in to rise this youth crime graph. For Instance:- Lack of affection from family is one extra reason for this trouble. During teenage a person need love and affection from family, they are in a life stage where most of the support need. Neglected teen are more prone to become criminal as lack of attention and love from family make them angry, violent plus arrogant as well. They usually channelized their negative energy to do crime.
Overall, to solve this issue I guess parents and family need to focus on their kids, instead of focusing all the time on work. Families need to give time to there kids so that they deserve the love what they need. A part from this, government also need to begin some youth program and need to create jobs for Young adults so that they can earn money and support themself and family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, for instance, i guess, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66022099448 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18271379069 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6698992902 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7222222222 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177638737157 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653464607679 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477288576845 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125356759137 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326655715181 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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