Scientists agree that people ruin their health by eating junk food. Some people think that the best way to prevent people from eating junk food is to educate them while others believe that this won't work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Consumption of excessive junk food is the topmost concern of scientists today. they believe that people are causing more harm to their body and health by eating them. In response to that, some people think that we can put a stop on this eating habit of our society by educating them. However, other argued that it will change nothing. In my opinion, i assume that giving right guidance to people through eduction we can change some proportion of individuals.
To commence with, the one who imagine that coaching people will work. they feel that we need tell people about detrimental effects of consuming fast food via video presentation or by seminar, this will have long-lasting impact on their minds. The one who had no clue about the negative impact, will get aware of this. And the other who already knew about this prior to this meeting, will be more concerned about it. As result of these, whenever they want to eat them, they will consider about the cons of their action and try to avoid it. In addition to that we can also tell them about the alternative of junk foods during this seminars so that they can choose them instead of unhealthy products to eat. The best advice we can give them is to eat green vegetable and other that are rich in protein to change their habit.
On contrast, the other group says that the result would be totally different. Firstly, they doubt that more than 50 percent of the crowd in the summit will forget about the devastating effect of fast foods on health, at the time when they stepped out of the building. No one will consider them in near future they will do think what's in their mind at that point of time. Moreover, they pointed out that even though if we educate them , the big business companies of fast food industry will come up with new false advertisement which will derive attention of the customer and it will tend them to buy it.
In conclusion , i suppose that tutoring humankind about the disadvantageous effects will change them a bit. I agree that not whole society will change but to start with few is the best idea, and not be on zero. we still need to make some efforts to change whole picture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 64.0 24.0651302605 266% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60824742268 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31781824003 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525773195876 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0574132856 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1052631579 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263258003943 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934655019462 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695843082827 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177638259077 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127726574129 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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