Scientists agree that people ruin their health by eating junk food. Some people think that the best way to prevent people from eating junk food is to educate them while others believe that this won't work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Experts believe that individuals have affected their health by consuming junk food. It is argued by some that most appropriate route of controlling people from eating junk food is by educating them. Although, others do not agree with this approach. This essay will discuss both the notions followed by personal opinion.
To begin with, education of the right quality of food is critically essential these days because it makes the consumer alert before eating such products. People should be Knowledgeable on the food items they are consuming so that they choose appropriate food for them rather than eating anything which may material is valuable information for a customer to choose right product and display of addition of cheese in a pictorial way on packet makes customer alert before eating junk foods. Therefore providing details about the product on the packaging material is quite useful to make buyer conscious before shopping such items.
However, educated people are more involved in obesity issues since the lack of time in their daily schedule makes it difficult for them to follow their knowledge. In these cases, the lifestyle of people needs to be changed especially in urban regions where people have limited time to such things. For instance, most students are constrained of time to do the cooking for themselves, therefore, they prefer to consume junk foods even they are aware of risks associated. Hence, only education is not sufficient. I believe with that increase in taxes on junk food items can play some role in limiting people from the intake of these food items.
In conclusion, while, only knowledge on food consumption is not sufficient to prevent people from eating junk foods, education plus an increase in the market price of these items can surely prevent consumers from the intake of rubbish food products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... eating junk food is by educating them. Although, others do not agree with this approach...
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ll discuss both the notions followed by personal opinion. To begin with, education of the rig...
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Message: Did you mean 'essentially'?
Suggestion: essentially
...the right quality of food is critically essential these days because it makes the consume...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
... they are consuming so that they choose appropriate food for them rather than eating anythi...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...le information for a customer to choose right product and display of addition of chee...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a pictorial way" with adverb for "pictorial"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...oduct and display of addition of cheese in a pictorial way on packet makes customer alert before e...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...ustomer alert before eating junk foods. Therefore providing details about the product on ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e from the intake of these food items. In conclusion, while, only knowledge on ...
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Suggestion:
...om the intake of rubbish food products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16943521595 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5419603133 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.441331105 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405888706092 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146971432198 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989613758343 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278997572528 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974154874027 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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