In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.
To what extent do you agree?
Education is important aspect of a person life. Everyone need to have at least enough college knowledge, but as of now days the prominent problem occurred is costly tuition fees. Since it has been skyrocketed from past not all students can afford it now. To solve this issue some people believe that educations in university need to be free for anyone. Although it's an good idea to boost up literacy rate but I am not fully agree with it I can give a little support to idea but not up to full extent. This scenario will leads to some other major problem.
To commence with, Firstly to give better education in university, the authorities required to hire some excellent staff which will cost handsome amount of money. Usually these institutes charge from student fees and pay the salary of professors but if free study started in universities then who will pay for them? if government decide o pay then how they will fund them? The only solution they will do is by increasing taxes on general public, and that does not make sense for everyone. Secondly, free education would lead to lack of motivation in students to study, as they do not have to pay for it so they will be less focused and will pay less attention to their grades and knowledge.
Despite of all cons, I am somewhat agree with the free studies but it should be conditional. There no need to make it zero cost but the only need is to cut cost. Students need to pay half of the funds and rest need to be arranged by both federal and provincial government. In addition, Scholarships need to be provided by government for intelligent students according to their grades. so that they support themselves and can study hard.
In conclusion, universities also need to consider their rates before increasing it up every year. government need to put a cap on it so they can not abuse the students. education is somewhat like water for a person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...eed to be free for anyone. Although its an good idea to boost up literacy rate but...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...t up to full extent. This scenario will leads to some other major problem. To comm...
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Suggestion: If
...niversities then who will pay for them? if government decide o pay then how they w...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... they will do is by increasing taxes on general public, and that does not make sense for every...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
.... Despite of all cons, I am somewhat agree with the free studies but it should be ...
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Suggestion: So
...ent students according to their grades. so that they support themselves and can st...
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Suggestion: Government
...tes before increasing it up every year. government need to put a cap on it so they can not...
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Suggestion: Education
... it so they can not abuse the students. education is somewhat like water for a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, at least, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63421828909 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58851532487 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545722713864 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9563973997 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6842105263 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355926943163 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991191494512 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690199931126 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194644877272 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553216354667 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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