Living in big cities is bad for people s health To what extent do you agree or disagree
pollution
no time for family
depression and stress depression isolation
better standard of living
all necessities can be fulfilled easily
Temptation for finding a better standard of living and easier access for finding employment is constantly leading to a constant shift of population from rural to urban areas. As more people are constantly migrating to cities therefore certain problems such as pollution and housing have become a constant threat for people dwelling in densely populated cities. In the following paragraphs I will elaborate that why I totally agree that city life is bad for leading a healthy and fulfilling life.
Beyond any qualms there are numerous reasons to support my view that city life has a negative impact on a person's health. Firstly, due to overcrowding the most of the cities face problems related to pollution which negatively impacts the health of city dwellers. Urban population have been found to be more affected by diseases related to lungs and respiratory system such as bronchitis, tuberculosis, upper respiratory tract infections etc. Another major reason that affects the health of urban population is constant stress due to long working hours. Prolonged working hours forces them to stay away from their families and thus they are not able to spend time with their family members and health issues such as depression, isolation, schizophrenia and other mental health issues are more common in urban dwellers.
On the contrary, some people believe that the city life provided a better standard of living where they get all the facilities on the click of a button for instance, not just fresh organic vegetables but also even a thing a small as a bottle opener can be easily delivered at home. Also, city life provides a better standard of education facilities as most renowned schools are mostly situated in big cities. However, I believe that compromising on your own health is a big gamble in exchange of better standard of living. Life threatening health issues such as depression and suicide which are common among city dwellers are more serious issues.
In conclusion, I believe that city life is overall bad for people's health as it leads to upper respiratory tract infections and also leads to mental health issues such as depression and suicide. Therefore, I believe that a simple rural life is better for leading a healthy and peaceful life. Whether the rural population stop the trend of migration towards the temptation to dwell in a city life ? Still remains a question.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08629441624 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68442784595 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507614213198 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5705578483 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290489949068 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905543355581 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554994774244 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177368673833 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055550116376 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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