Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this world of globalisation, people are moving to different countries for better job opportunities. Hence, it is extremely important to learn the language and culture of the new Nation to settle well. However, it is not always easy to understand a new culture as it is all together a new learning. In my opinion, everyone should try to learn new norms and I do not think, this can hinder our practical or social culture.
It is regardless to say that one must be attached to the rootes of their values, language and culture, irrespective of the countries they visit or work for, in the long or short run. It is therefore, the responsibility of a citizen to make sure that in the phase of learning a new culture they do not forget their own. For example, when Indians migrate to any location, they are deep rooted to their standard values. This leads us to the Undeniable fact that Indians adapt the best to any culture across the globe. Hence, there is no social or practical problems associated with speaking or following a new culture.
On the contrary, visiting a new Nation and not adapting to their culture may sound different for people or society to adjust with them. They may consider that a person is a rebellion or is rigid. This might bring any challenges where the person might be left alone with no help coming in. This brings to a question, if a person does not know the new foreign language and if he gets into a problem, then could he count on anyone around for help? This is a big reason for adapting to learn new language so it could be helpful in difficult times even.
Concluding, learning a new foreign language and communicating with the same holds utmost importance to survive successfully in a new nation. I would opine, this is fruitful rather than harmful in the long run and one must make sure to learn and adapt the new culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to come' or 'come'.
Suggestion: to come; come
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57910447761 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63224686275 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50447761194 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5873114336 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970004987779 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372105701026 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408702806032 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641474674559 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248365649279 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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