A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world?
Unquestionably, tourism is in of the most prevailing source of income all over the world. Many countries' economy depends on tourism income. This essay will discuss not only the tourism benefits but also its drawbacks.
Undoubtedly, tourism impacts strongly on the economy because firstly, it provides many job opportunities such as tour guides, hotel staff, and airport staff for serving all the tourists. Secondly, it affects the money exchange industry since many tourists with different currencies will exchange their money to the local currency.
Despite these advantages of tourism, the drawbacks cannot be denied. As soon as the country depends dramatically on the tourism income, it may be shadowed all of a sudden due to uncontrolled events happened locally or globally, for example, the pandemic we face in 2020. All these countries, which are influenced hugely by the pandemic, lost too much money as there was no tourism in this period and the airports were closed. Another disadvantage of tourism is that its implications on the local language and culture as when there are many tourists with various languages and cultures dealing with the public, this will affect the language over time.
In conclusion, Tourism is a double-edged weapon. In other words, it has positive aspects and negative ones, so every country that has a strong tourism industry should avoid its drawbacks to get its ample benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...urce of income all over the world. Many countries economy depends on tourism income. This...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28193832599 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75432227865 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625550660793 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6530575357 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244961489238 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110572430879 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794422228595 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156440995943 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100734106867 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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