It is an irrefutable fact that security of citizens is a main agenda of any government and new technological inventions like video cameras play crucial role in this field. However certain section of society advocate that these parameters restrict their liberties. I believe that there are more benefits than it's drawbacks which I am articulating in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, it is a strenuous task for any country's authorities to monitor manually every city. In addition, it will required a huge number of manpower which put an extra burden on the economy. Therefore, security cameras are more reliable resource to keep an eye on incidents within required area. Apart from this, videos can be recorded in these cameras
which assist to police to recognize and catch the victim for that particular crime. For instance, in a recent survey, it has been observed that after installing the security cameras in the most cities, the rate of crime has been declined and also this help to maintain law and order smoothly.
On the other hand, sometimes it might be possible that this will attack on the privacy. So, public fell bounded and blame that it is a hinder in their independence. For instance, plethora of incidents happened in last few years in many shopping malls that they leaked private videos of customers from trial room. However, security cameras used there to prevent from theft but some of them are used for such perilous activities.
To recapitulate, taking into account all the facts mentioned above above , in my propensity, the benefits of security cameras are overlooked the draw backs. It is a trustworthy source and owing to this it is growing rapidly across worldwide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04593639576 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70489465016 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618374558304 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2783243908 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221448577635 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630629096516 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051111361583 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109132172851 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255223974028 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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