Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is a good while other think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Telecasting advertisements through sports events by sponsoring or with another way is considered as a positive thing however, some people think, it has disadvantages as well. I will discuss both the views regarding merits and demerits in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, plethora companies which advert is their product via sports have ample advantages. First and foremost is financial aid for sportsmen. Because when a company sponsor any sport tournament then they provide money or another entities which help to make event successful as well as it contributes in monetary aid for the the players by enhancing the budget of that occasion. Moreover, sports are financed mainly by the company which do the trade of many valuable items has positive effect on audiences. As instance, Whey's protein, jogging shoes or another commodity that belongs to healthy lifestyle as shown in ads, hence, it promote these stuff and people become aware about these things.
On the other hand, some sports or sportsmen are sponsored by the companies of alcohol or another is hazardous drugs. which have negative impact mainly on the youngsters because they always prefer their role model's lifestyle. As example, Mc'well alcohol brand is advertised in last World Cup and it is 30% more preferred by the people as compared to past. In addition to it, Sometimes these sponsors may become the cause of violence and offence which is the major drawback of such type of adverts.
In my perception, Government should only allow those advertisements in sports which have good impact rather than negative.
To conclude, I pen down saying that Advantages and disadvantages go side-by-side but we can reduce disadvantages by taking wise decisions and steps. Government should take action against such offensive advertisements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33680555556 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84220212928 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8510993489 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227914256416 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696424121829 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727972048428 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119813077143 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950644679183 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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