Many countries consider eighteen year olds to be adults, while other countries don’t. What do you think about it? Give your opinion and some relevant examples based on your own experience.

Submitted by ishika on Fri, 02/08/2019 - 12:58

Different nations have allocated different age for deciding whether a person is mature or not.However i believe that age 18 is smart enough to declared legally as an adult since they have sufficient knowledge of the world to make decision and handle problems.the reasons behind my opinion are discussed in impandind paragraphs

To embark with,by the time children turn into eighteen,they have spent more than 14 years in the formal edu ation system.This give them sufficient knowledge of region's culture,economy,vegetation,politics and society to make a decision judiciary.To add more ,during this time ,by adaptation of physical changes in body,they become familier how to handle every problem sincerely.

Furthermore,at the stage of 18,they have learnt all the basic of all subjects.To illustrate,in this afe most of the students know the environment changes like global warming ,plastic waste and so on.Additionally,majority of people have devloped a strong idea of morality ,due to that ,they know enogh about honesty,integrity,love and care to make a wise choice.N evthless,by turning in this stage, they become aware about the rules and ragulations as well as human rights,so it would be right if an authority put them into the list of adulthood

To recapitulate,the ability to think rightly and make informed cohices have been developed in the age of eighteen,therefore, leave them independent in life and to transform them into responsible life,is too important at this time.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49130434783 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.9588359214 2.80592935109 141% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665217391304 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 115.0 20.2975951904 567% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 631.5 106.682146367 592% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 115.0 20.7667163134 554% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.5 7.06120827912 404% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0455462772393 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361411559086 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0026866857687 0.0667982634062 4% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.027654441893 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00864019381007 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 61.9 13.0946893788 473% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -62.17 50.2224549098 -124% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 50.5 11.3001002004 447% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.75 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.35 8.58950901804 167% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 48.0 10.1190380762 474% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.7795591182 575% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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