In many countries, governments have spent a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropiate use of government money?
Improvement of internet access has been an important fact for governments investments in different nations. However, I believe there are more relevant issues that should be embrace by the government's economy such health care.
On one hand, a possible reason why governments funds have been spent on improving internet access is because it is an important tool for enterprises to be able to have constant communication with overseas, either as part of their sales, associates or to contact other industries as a need of supplies. Furthermore, there is a possibility that the governments are investing on their nation's education as well, which would explain the significance of having an acceptable network's connectivity to enable people to access to the free online information sharing.
On the other hand, personally, I do not think internet connection should be the greatest investment governments need to do, I rather believe health care is the most important aspect in a nation, reason why governments money should be spent on this fact. Therefore, covering basic sanitation would be the first issue to be addressed, because there is an alarming number of countries that lack from sanitation infrastructure which help the promotion of health by preventing humans to develop any diseases as a consequence of being in contact with their own wastes such as sewage or garbage.
To conclude, although internet access offers a wide range of benefits and opportunities to people, there are more urgent issues to be solved around the world. Hence governments should consider about the use they are planning to give their money, because there are human basic needs to be covered first.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25555555556 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96333562471 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1260464165 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.375 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.75 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251232946304 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120235934553 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816185868521 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159073276723 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159864207918 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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