In many countries more and more young people are becoming jobless What problems do you think unemployment will cause to individuals and the society What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters

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In many countries more and more young people are becoming jobless. What problems do you think unemployment will cause to individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters.

The ever increasing population is rendering more and More young people unemployed in many countries. This problem always affect both individuals and society as a whole are many. This essay look this issue and suggest a few remedial measures which may be effective to alleviating unemployment to certain extent.
First and foremost, joblessness among youngsters has been a burning issue is faced many countries, especially overpopulated ones. For a clear example, in India every year hundreds of thousands young people who completed their university qualification and difficulty to find a suitable job. Every person should be productive enough to earn his or her basic needs. Mass unemployment means mass unproductivity as result to decline our economic growth and development by way of lack of food, education and better housing facilities.
Moreover, fruitful steps should be taken to curb the problem. Create more job opportunity for instance, it Will reduce this phenomenon although authorities is responsible for this solution, but it not possible in spite of lack of resource. Another possible remedy is to remove old and unproductive employees for their post and give such cance to meritorious youngsters. And also provide job oriented education and vocational training. Every education programme should be framed on Job oriented it help to enhance our financial development and growth and overcome certain difficulties.
To wind up, overpopulation is a big threat is the world facing today. However, provide more job opportunities and termination of old employees and quality education will be curtail the problem.

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Average: 5.6 (16 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, for instance, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.508 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09603359155 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0991022393 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248308105197 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786979232673 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705697094373 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144433869562 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631271379801 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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