In many countries more and more young people are becoming jobless What problems do you think unemployment will cause to individuals and the society What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters

In today's world unemployment have become the major issue in all natoins. Although, In most of the countries majority of youngsters are becoming jobless. This essay will not only highlights the problems caused by unemployment to the youth but also sone potential measures to migiate it.

There are some problems which can be face by youngsters when they have no job. However, when the youth is having nothing to do for earning money they feel unrestful and they also become irritated easily with no reason. Moreover, it leads them to the criminals where they comitt crimes such as snatching and roberry to fulfill their hungerbof money which results in get back to the ropes of prison. Some of the youngsters get addicted to alchohals after receiving clean refusal from the job. It have some negative effects on their health also. Eventually, after getting addiction of alchohal, most of the youngsters get captured by some serious health issues, such as adverse effect of alchohal on their lungs and on other body parts.

There are some important measures to control the continuous increasing rate of the unemployment. However, retirement age should be limited in some aspects to give opportunitiesopportunities to the youth to get well paid jobs in eficient time in order to raise their financial statuses. The another excellent and very helpful solution is to develop the local industrialization including small and medium industries, especially in rural areas to well educated youngsters as well as to those who are not educated. Indirectly, it also helps in raising economical status of the country.

To summarise, government of all the nations should provide prominent opportunities to maintain the employment rate so country can be grow fastly in every aspect such as economy, science and technology.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, well, as to, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21917808219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02542860432 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2365630209 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137254850309 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516500429829 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515172726442 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944987086357 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774293543197 0.056905535591 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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