In many countries school children spend a lot of their free time doing homework. Is this a good thing or a bad thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In many countries school children spend a lot of their free time doing homework. Is this a good thing or a bad thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Homework has been a part of students lives for so long that the idea of not doing it can seem surreal, or even impossible. Some people seem to believe that this will help the children in their academic career. But if you stop to think about it, the truth is that homework is not necessary. Well, here are a few arguments that will definitely convince that homework is not something that should be done by kids.

Kids already have seven hours of school. You start school at eight and go home at three. That’s a full day of school. Most adults work similar lengths of time at work and come home exhausted. Yet they can’t understand when their kids have trouble focusing at the end of a full day of learning.

But the biggest fallacy of all lies in our near religious confidence that more homework makes better students .School is a time for learning, and it takes up much of the day.

After school is the time for pursuing your own hobbies and personal pastimes. Regardless of how much a student generally studies each day, if that student sacrifices sleep time to study more than usual, he or she will have more trouble understanding material taught in class and be more likely to struggle on an assignment or test the following day.

Students are increasingly likely to sacrifice sleep time for studying in the latter years of high school. I strongly believe, this negative dynamic will become increasingly prevalent over time.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'well']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227106227106 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.161172161172 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106227106227 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0549450549451 0.0501214627716 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047619047619 0.0437548338989 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131868131868 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.029304029304 0.0403226058552 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47847879613 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.018315018315 0.0326793684256 56% => OK
Particles: 0.003663003663 0.00163938923432 223% => OK
Determiners: 0.0842490842491 0.0861772015684 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.021978021978 0.021408717616 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014652014652 0.011925033212 123% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1445.0 1933.35771543 75% => OK
No of words: 252.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73412698413 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.297619047619 0.374742101984 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246031746032 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170634920635 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0873015873016 0.137316102897 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47847879613 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 66.4801513622 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1347475462 49.517814964 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 127.492653851 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 0.814263465372 35% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 42.6031746032 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.47222222222 1.69124875643 87% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214669205531 0.332605444948 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106628331502 0.102741220458 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0516085421747 0.0668466124924 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.583949942989 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167856489146 0.148594505496 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866223627145 0.134430193775 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457907204823 0.0742795772207 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.198907409307 0.324371583561 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0530087457431 0.0638462369009 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127373796363 0.228012699653 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223616810561 0.058150111329 38% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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