In Many Countries Small Shops And Town Centers Are Going Out Of Business Because People Tend To Drive To The Large Out Of Town Stores This Results In An Increase In Car Use And It Also Means That People Without Cars Have Limited Access To Out Of Town Stor

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In Many Countries Small Shops And Town Centers Are Going Out Of Business, Because People Tend To Drive To The Large Out-Of-Town Stores. This Results In An Increase In Car Use, And It Also Means That People Without Cars Have Limited Access To Out-Of-Town Stores. Do You Think Advantages Of Such Development Outweigh Its Disadvantages?

Evidence suggests that a growing number of people in many countries over the world tend to purchase their goods from The Large Out-Of-Town Stores instead of Town Centers. This phenomenon causes the widespread use of cars and bankruptcy of small shops. Although there are a number of drawbacks involved in this trend, I personally believe the benefits are far more.
On the plus side, the advantages for the people flocking to large stores in the suburbs are manifold. To begin with, the large scale malls provide individuals with an instant and high-quality of shopping experience. Simply put, they lay the groundwork for the offering an easy access to vast majority of goods that would cater for people’s needs such as cloths, foods, and toys and so on. In addition, with considering that shopping process is a time-consuming and tedious activity, the people who opt to these shopping centers for purchasing, can benefit from a wide variety of recreational facilities such as restaurants, coffee shops, cinema and playgrounds for children and would spend a quality time with their families. These places, furthermore, usually allocate a wide space for parking compared with the small shops in town centers that can mitigate the problem of traffic jams.
However, the downside cannot be ignored. The most axiomatic argument is concerned with the consumption of fuels. That is to say, because the large shopping malls are located in the countryside, people are willing to use their own car. As the number of cars rises, the demand for more fossil fuels increases, which cause more pollution as well as the depletion of the world resources. This in turn can cause irreparable damage to the environment.
To conclude, in my personal opinion, although driving outwards to large out of town stores might have some disadvantages, the merits are more prominent.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...hey lay the groundwork for the offering an easy access to vast majority of goods that would ca...
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Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...to the environment. To conclude, in my personal opinion, although driving outwards to large out...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14521452145 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77406825691 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7390178612 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309694993557 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094721127566 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889065372126 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193485013483 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769703961625 0.056905535591 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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