In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people.
What do you think may be the reasons for this?
What problems might this cause in society?
Give reasons for your answer & include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Around the world today, we are seeing elder people are living alone, they feel unsecure , today the wide topic is being discussed in the world
as there is less importance is given to elder people.
We know life goes by different phases like first new born , toddler, teenager,adult, senior citizen. At every stage of life everyone have different thoughts, like most beautiful days of lifes are when we are young as we have energy, aim, goals, expectation from life so everybody works hard to achieve it. but afterwards another chapter of life begins which goes to ending part, where person needs support of life partner, family member, if
the persons do not get respect, importance, when nobody waits for his opinion then he starts to fill anxious, nervous, depressed. Here I want to mention same situation is happening with senior citizen .
There are numerous reasons behind it like more privacy, nuclear family, thinking forward, money, lavish life style, Independency, life approach has been changed for example, for getting good education kids have to travel faraway from their hometown, family. Many of the times they loose communication with their parents and when they settled in their life they just feel that if their parents will start to live with them then they can loose their privacy, their parents might failed to accept new way of living.
However if this condition will goes on then Firstly, in the future there may more number of old age homes. Secondly coming generations may loose the heritage of our society. Thirdly, our community will become where no one will have respect for one another.
In my personal experience, the golden days of my life I spend with my grand parents.From them I acquire life lessons like to love, to take care, to forgive, to help in need person , to be innocent and firm. Some how today my kids are loosing all it. As we are staying away from our family.
Thus, to control all this ,there must be family gettogether, often talk with relatives, support one another in family problems, discuss with parents if we are facing any issue. more importance should given to old person in family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90082644628 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40947748435 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.6116549411 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.6 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107899606602 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352592641321 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284829698974 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474208931173 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027925065719 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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