In many countries traditional customs are lost.
Why is this happening.
What school and parents can do to keep it alive.
It has become a big concern for many nations, as their original customs are getting vanished. There are various reasons behind this. However, schools and our guardians can play a major role to preserve this. This essay will discuss both causes and solutions of it, in the below essay.
There are two major causes of this situation. The first and the most prevailing one is globalization, which has resulted in interference of different cultures. As people are now able to freely move across the world, which helps them to learn and comprehend about different people following different ritual. Knowing others can be new and exciting for some and they start finding their own customs boring and orthodox. Owing to this reason, they start adapting this new traditions, by losing their own. The other reason is lack of awareness of their own traditional practices. Take holidays for an instance, these are normally given to celebrate festivals, so that the youngster’s can learn these extremely important customs. However, with the advanced technology and the evolution of transportation have made possible for many people to spend their vacations in different parts of the world. This can prevent children from learning it, which can eventually destroy it from its roots.
The above courses can be mitigated if parents and education system come forward to save it. Firstly, schools can give deeper comprehending about the past. As schools are the one from where children can learn the basic fundaments about the past history. Therefore, if schools teach the young ones how it first started, and why it is essential to preserve it, then children will be motivated and can have a brief understanding about it. Secondly, children act and learn, what they see from their parents. A study has shown that India is known to be rich in its cultural beliefs. As they love to celebrate it with their families with great enthusiasm, which eventually helps the future generation to keep it intact. Consequently, it will be well preserved.
To conclude, though there are a number of reasons behind this situation, but it can be alleviated if school starts providing information about its importance, and parents come forward by setting their own examples by celebrating t with their kids. Therefore, it is strongly recommended that steps should be taken by both to conserve the utterly important traditions of their own country.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and they start finding their own customs boring and orthodox. Owing to this reaso...
^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve deeper comprehending about the past. As schools are the one from where children...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12373737374 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7236074791 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540404040404 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3923759835 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2173913043 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2173913043 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194123704909 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573747736098 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377738269631 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127182940097 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246145259275 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and they start finding their own customs boring and orthodox. Owing to this reaso...
^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve deeper comprehending about the past. As schools are the one from where children...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12373737374 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7236074791 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540404040404 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3923759835 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2173913043 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2173913043 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194123704909 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573747736098 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377738269631 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127182940097 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246145259275 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.