In recent times, re-offending after getting released from the prison is surging at an alarming rate. This occurrence has a number of causative factors including the negative outlook of the society towards criminals as well as lack of rehabilitation programme for the inmates. This essay will discuss the possible causes of this problem and propose some measures to address it.
Looking firstly at the causes, one of the most obvious reasons for re-offending is the negative attitude of our community against ex-convicts. This is because people think that offenders are still a threat for the society even if they have served their punishments, which compels them to adopt a repulsive behavior towards criminals. For instance, companies often deny job offers to lawbreakers once they get released from incarceration only because of the negative stereotype that prevails in the society. Another potential cause is the scarcity of rehabilitation programme in maximum prisons. In other words, although prisoners receive their sentences physically in the jail, psychologically they still retain the same criminalistic mindset due to the deprivation of counseling therapy. Therefore, their tendency to commit crimes might never fade away resulting in re-emergence into the dark world of criminal activities.
To combat this issue, two effective solutions can be implemented. Firstly, society needs to change its mentality towards the ex-criminals. To clarify, if these offenders receive emotional and financial support from the community as well as the government after their release, the likelihood of repeated indulgence in crime will become very negligible. Bangladesh is the epitome in this case as it has instigated vocational training facilities for its inmates, which, in turn, not only has increased the job opportunities for them but also has endowed them with the chance to lead a crime-free life. Secondly, government should allocate funds for offering rehabilitation to the prisoners. The reason behind this is that it would make the criminals realize their past mistakes incapacitating them to commit offences again.
To conclude, society’s apathetic attitude toward the criminals and deficiency of rehabilitation therapy are the prime reasons for the released criminals to orchestrate evil plans repeatedly. However, if government and society co-operate by taking the above mentioned steps, then this problem is not insurmountable at all.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6222826087 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07399178724 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600543478261 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4312200772 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.705882353 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175192348359 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054799325182 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351006181533 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10974204926 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277939865267 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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