In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measure could be taken to prevent this?
It has often been argued that developing nations undergoes many projects including raising buildings and installation of distinct manufacturing units that leads to contamination of water and air pollution. This can be taken care by inheriting new technologies to filter water and to restrict the usage of heavy vehicles in the city.
To begin with, it has commonly been noticed, those countries who are emerging as a growing country, goes through lot of infrastructure maintenance that involves breaking of rocks for making flat grounds giving rise to increase dust pollutant in the air. Also, projects including construction of high rise building in metropolitan cities disturbs the air quality index. Moreover, dissimilar industries located in urban area emit poisonous gases contributing in air pollution. For instance, country like India has undertaken many programmes that includes commencement of new industries from different countries that has disturbed the PH level of air mostly in cities like Delhi and lucknow.
In order to rectify the problem, one effective solution is to relocate the industries in suburb area so that people don not suffer from various health ailments caused due to bad air. Among all, government should take the initiative to launch the housing project one at a time so that air ph value balances itself leading to good air. With the advancement of technologies, it has now become easy to get air purifier machines so that air do not turn to be poisonous to breathe in. For example, Developed nations like USA have installed different air purifier and water purifier so that their citizens remains healthy and do not undergo serious health issue. According to the study done it has been figure out that 60% diseases are caused due to impure water.
To conclude, advanced technologies and stern policies are necessary to prevent further deterioration of air and water quality. Purified air and water would give us healthy life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25714285714 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85454202612 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612698412698 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8490089924 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287434477975 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928701959136 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315071455799 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161332124082 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197375427146 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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