Many jobs used to be done at home by hand but nowadays increasing number of them are done by using machines instead. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development.
It is hard to even name an area where technology has not left its impact. Similarly, nowadays household chores are accomplished with the help of machines and this trend has taken precedence over the activities that were being done manually. Further, in this essay, I will shed light on the merits and demerits of this progress.
Looking into positive aspects of reach of machines to all and sundry for doing their routine house works, i would like to mention that these machines are honest toward their job. Since, these gadgets do not feel like human being and run their errands well in time without causing any threat to the security of the communities at home. In addition to this, significant time saving with the use of these machines is possible because majority of these high tech equipment are automatic enabling them to work without human assistance. For examples, robots at present are available that can sweep and mop the floor at scheduled time, giving human enough time to concentrate on their new skills. Therefore, gadgets carrying out household activities have great importance in human life
On the other hand, deleterious effects of these technically innovative machines cannot be downplayed by any means. Firstly, these machines promote sedentary lifestyle reducing physical activity of human which is already very limited in this technical era. Secondly, unavoidable noise produced by these machines may cause discomfort and sometimes could affect the working of eardrum, an essential organ in ear whose vibration strengthens human to listen to sound of several types . A research has revealed that people using electronic gadgets have high proclivity of falling prey to hearing disorders, especially people of old age. Moreover, it is also it is not possible for everyone to enjoy robots at their services, as one has to learn to teach these machines for doing various tasks which is not possible for everyone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, as to, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13058419244 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54371215635 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632302405498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.888725969 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.416666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184020297965 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605048037467 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388337653968 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119654575795 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00653313923441 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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