Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Lots of museums charge a fee while others do not. This essay thinks that the benefits of charging eclipse the drawbacks in the sense that the income will be ploughed back into operation and development of the museums.
Some people believe that having an admission fee might exclude a large proportion of the population, especially in less developed countries. Many people in poorer countries have just enough money for food and shelter which makes it impossible for them to pay for exhibitions. While this being a valid argument, this could be solved if the local community are allowed access free of charge. In Hong Kong, for instance, folk museums which preserver historic relics and display folk customs allow entrance for the locals without any charges. It also would be outrageous to make a profit out of the heritage of a community.
Granted, an entrance fee might have a negative effect on the number of visitors, but an income is favourable to museums in terms of operation. Museums spend an enormous amount of money not only in acquiring but also to maintain artefacts which majority is a process majority is inconsiderate about. Furthermore, they feature educational exhibitions to make the public aware of their cultural heritage and differences with other cultures which could not have been done without a sum of money expended on hiring professionals. For example, Sri Lankan naval museum holds monthly exhibitions on different issues and professional docents are employed to take visitors on a guided tour around the museum. This speaks volumes about how a reasonable admission charge is advantageous to the operation of a museum.
In conclusion, the disadvantageous of an admission fee are outweighed by the benefits of productive services that could be provided by an income. Therefore, I am convinced that museums should charge an entrance fee for the sake of operation and development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15806451613 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89804017167 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1377104916 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3641078091 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119339584893 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911906837497 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21393287959 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123586794458 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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