Many museums charge fo admission while others free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Gainning knowledge with good sources is very important. Though it costs money but knowledge is life. Without knowledge,life
is like example of empty house.
Museums are like symbole of civilization. We can get knowledge and information about any nation from their history. Historical
symboles always keep into the museums. Tourists are always like to visit the museums when they visit any country. Some of museums
are free and some of them are not. Museums are consider as important visiting place. So, it should be offering free for some catagories
of people like students and teachers for gaining historical knowledge. On the other hand, others should not be offerig full free as the
museums are the great source of income. Government can earn foreign currency from museums as well the local currency. Big and old
museums should not offer free of cost. Nowadays, students are finiding interest on computer games, vedio games, dramas.So, students
should get opportunity to enter the museums free of charge. Museums are the great source of knowledge.Every people should enriched
their minds with knowledge. In some special day museums can have some sepecial discount on tickets as all kinds of people can visit.
Museums have their own maintainence cost. So,some aspects it should not be charged of free.On the other hand government can loose the
foriegn currency as well as local currency.
In my opinion, for students, admission of museums should be free of cost as they can learn history, culture of the country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25910931174 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5926994009 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53036437247 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.73692185 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3684210526 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31578947368 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242015830517 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776330864232 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546483458637 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896073458702 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615596862616 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.34 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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