Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
childhood life is always colorful.Every child wants to paly with toys or without toys.children learn from family and outside environment.That time they cannot jaudge by
themselves what is good and what is bad.They never think about their future.
Children are always happy to play with veraity type of toys.Their mind is soft and delicate so, with same toys they do not paly many days.They want changes their toys
every couple of weeks.Children always follow other children and new toys.They never satiesfied with their pesent toys.Some parents always go to shop with their children.
In shop they watch different kind of toyes and ask for the new toys.Some children cry for the toys at instant so, parents buy them. Children always happy with the lagre
number of toys.Actully, every parents want to see his or her children happy at any cost. Psycologically,some parents think that if buy more toys children will happy more.
Every thing has their limit. They more you buy the more children are happy. With large number of toys some children that whatever they want,parents will give me. This type
of attitude will hamper their childhood life. so unnessesary toys should never buy for them.
In conclusion, every parents want to see their children happy and pass their childhood life smoothly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19718309859 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70916020775 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539906103286 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.4009434603 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379345569534 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155662388113 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837131956685 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176767763929 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608536022019 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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