Many people associate money with happiness and think that the more money one has, the happier they should be. Do you agree with this statement? Give relevant examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, money plays a vital role in everyone's life on a daily basis. It is a myth that more money gives happiness than others. Most of people associate money with happiness and they believe that they should be happier when someone is more wealthy. However I do not agree to this statement. This essay analyze both the views before conclusion is dervied.
Firstly, there are number of reasons to believe that rich people are happier as it satisfies there need in a luxuary manner like big car, house, and other valuable properties and it might lead their life beyond their expectations. On the other hand, they become center of attraction when they sped more money among the public in all the places including temples. In of the newspapers survey among the wide range of people, it is concluded in societies that being full of cheerfulness and happiness is directly related to the amount of money individuals can have in order to acquire their wishes.
Secondly, in my opinion, when someone holds more amount of money value then it just provides the RICH status level in the society and the happiness. One of the ancient saint states in his biography that wealthy lifestyle cannot make people pleased and satisfied all the time because there are many valuable things that are not bought only because of money, example, relationships who care, who give their blood in case of emergency etc. For an instance, if an individual lose their beloved and their dearest one’s due to death, it is almost impossible to change this kind of sorrowful feeling and become elated again with spending money.
After evaluating various arguements as above, I do not agree with the aformentioned statement that money makes one happy. Money plays vitual role in today's today however it is not the only thing to make someone leads their life happier. Though, for luxury life it is necessary to increase the value of money held, it is also essential to maintain relationships with whom real happiness can be shared.
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92352941176 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49841472229 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561764705882 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7104438356 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364086467148 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133316848364 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960792663071 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236298857092 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114315931606 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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