Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy.
Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it
It is true that there has been a decrease in educational standars during the last few years especially in academic subjects such as litreture and math. There are various reasons for this scheme and teachers and school authorities should take steps to tackle this problem.
The most important reason which causes such a decline in educational standards is that schools time table is already full with impractical subjects such as art, music and soprt. It is a fact that these subjects can be learned by students while they are not at school and children can opt them based on their talent, motivation and interests. Furthermore, using software programs such as calculator or word processor diminish the pupil's quality in calculating and dictation. Moreover, schools suffer lack of useful teaching styles and methods and consequently childeren do not trained well in some specific subjects. Take Germany for example, the government could boost the students' knowledge of literature by training the teachers in 20 secondary schools in 2015.
There are a few solutions for this negative trend that can be beneficial and decrease the detrimental effects of scarcity of perfect educational system. Firstly, Governments should enhance the educational quality by employing well trained teachers who are motivated to educate pupils. Secondly, compulsory training courses for teachers should be added to schools' curriculum. Finally, schools' educational program should be revised regarding the academic subjects that are taught to children. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that the American governments could overcome this problem by improving the educational system in 2004 and as a result the literature and accounting literacy increased up to 30% among the students.
In conclusion, although children should learn descipline, art and vocational trainings at school since they are practical in their future life, the importance of academic subjects should not be neglected. educational authorities can address rhis problem by regulating and controling the school curriculum.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...example, the government could boost the students knowledge of literature by training the...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Educational
...demic subjects should not be neglected. educational authorities can address rhis problem by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5504587156 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88395905613 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574923547401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.106298694 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.642857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119189307418 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441252210617 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408476569628 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752082881257 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318852052862 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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