Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.
Parenting is an art which can be mastered with practice. It is commonly believed that female tend to make a better parent than men, however, there are others who disagree with this thought. According to me, both men and women are equally responsible for the growth of their child. The below essay will discuss the reasons and some examples.
To begin with, it is undeniable that the relation between a mother and a child is beyond human cognition. In fact, mother’s hold a special position in a child’s life for which there is no replacement. Firstly, as men are busy at work women tend to spend most of the time with their children and so the child develops a strong relationship with his mother, moreover, he shares each and every thought with his mother which means they develop a close bond with them. Secondly, mothers are the one who imprints moral values in their children. Lastly, since generation women are known to be more patient and organized than men. For instance, a recent study done by the “Human psychologist” showed that 70% of women proved to be more active, oriented and a good time manager than men. Thus, it shows that women can be an amazing parent.
On the other hand, men also hold an important role in a child’s development. Men are the breadwinner for the family. Although a child should have soft skills, however, the ability to handle challenges and standing firmly in case of any odds or difficulties is also a talent which a child learns from his father as men are more emotionally and physically stronger than women. For example, a recent experiment done by the researchers of California demonstrated that 80% of women tend to break very easily in a sensitive issue.
To conclude, after analyzing all the possible aspects of the argument given it is evident that both men and women together can make up a good parent for a child. They have to contribute equally towards the progress of their child and make him or her a better human being for tomorrow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... others who disagree with this thought. According to me, both men and women are equally respons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79083094556 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70905957573 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553008595989 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7121011576 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3529411765 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277633007065 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960006348919 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638440278542 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189525495596 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418445254614 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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