Many people buy new phones or laptops to keep up with the latest technology. Is this a good thing or bad thing?
A majority of people prefer to purchase upgraded smartphones and computers to be updated with trending technology. I undoubtedly consider this as a favorable development as it is making their lives more efficient and convenient.
To embark upon, the latest equipment has features that are enhancing the productivity of people. This is due to their availability of upgraded processor, latest internet source adaptability, higher rams, and internal memories. 4G mobile phones, for instance, can run the 4G internet technologies, which has increased their web speed commendably in comparison to their previous versions. Because of this, people could download and upload files faster on their phones and consequently experiencing a massive reduction in the waiting time which was earlier due to low net speed.
Moreover, updated models of devices have options and utilities, which are raising our level of convenience. There are many works that people were earlier doing either manually or using heavy equipment. However, now the same can be done effortlessly on handheld devices and laptops. To illustrate, phones are now coming with up to 48-megapixel cameras, which is equivalent to the digital camera. Due to which, they are saved from carrying these cameras while traveling or going to any auspicious occasions. The same applies to digital diaries. These up gradations to make everyone’s lives easier are kept on going continuously, which has made it mandatory for users to be up to date to technology.
In conclusion, in my opinion, it is beneficial to own the latest equipment because they are making the lives of people smooth and elevating their efficiency superbly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...their availability of upgraded processor, latest internet source adaptability, higher ra...
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Line 5, column 610, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...e everyone's lives easier are kept on going continuously, which has made it mandato...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41064638783 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04026100472 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0013426186 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151153849418 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484034992539 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412160341315 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881363736689 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185077577478 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.