Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
it’s generally agreed that lots of people nowadays prefer to watch international movies rather than local films for several reasons. however, the question of whether governments should allocate a special budget to evolve their films productions is arguably the most valuable one as I wholeheartedly believe that the local movies industry might bring several advantages and this essay will explore the reasons and positive impacts of developing such an industry in further detail.
To begin with, it’s irrefutable that international movies have a huge turnout by local people these days for a plethora of factors. First of all, it’s more popular than local films in many nations. this is widely attributed to the participation of well-known actors and investing highly in marketing campaigns. Titanic movie as an example is a famous film which has watched by not less than half of the world’s population due to the colossal financial investments in the marketing advertisements. Second of all, international movie industries particularly the American one uses the latest technologies which might be costly but has a positive impact on the film. For instance, the kind of cameras’ lens and lighting have changed drastically in the last few years which largely contribute to increasing the reality of movies and, consequently, rise the rate of watchers.
however, enhancing of local films production by providing financial aids might be extremely helpful for lots of causes. Firstly, it is considered as an extra resource for many developing nations. To illustrate, when governments take their responsibilities to evolve such a critical field by providing a good amount of financial support, it will eventually reflect by elevating the sales of productions which mean a larger amount of taxes and enhancing the entertainment field that leads to create many job opportunities in different facilities such as cinemas, theaters and more other places. Secondly, it provides a good reputation about the nation and helps it to improve other industries such as tourism. To elaborate, most of the people around the world might dream to visit or even live in the USA as they watched plenty of films which have shown how America is one of the most advanced nations worldwide by their technology, natural, and many more aspects. Thus, enhancing local films might play a crucial role in raising the tourism rate.
To sum up, many people these days watch international movies more than local films as it is more popular and advanced than the local ones. however, I strongly believe that governments should apply more attention to such a critical industry as it might enhance the tourism industry and many more feilds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32488479263 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95621670839 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502304147465 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 723.6 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3041518633 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.4375 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372472905033 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131045562374 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944269678133 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259248192024 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679828864043 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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