One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that globalisation and industrialization at global level have affected widely. There are both positive and negative consequences of international business as it enhances the opportunity of working, advancement in infrastructure as well as quality of life, however, it affects surrounding area in terms of pollution. In my opinion, former view outdo the latter and this easy would shed light on both sides of the statement in following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are deluges of bright arguments to support international business.The most preponderant one is that increasing multinational organisations offer a great deal of employment as all companies require workers in order to fulfill the production process. It can not only contribute to minimise the poverty, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields namely; uplifting the lifestyle of masses and gives exposure to sharp their skills. Directly, these amenities boost the economy of any nation. Thanks to wide range of advantages it offers, masses can enhance the quality and productivity of their lives by getting jobs with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand in one good stead as far as agumenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of aforementioned propositions is that it is only likely to help one excel and thrive in varied areas. Besides, overseas companies are also blessing for layman because when there companies are constructed, other facilities like transportation, roads, infrastructure are also developed which is imperative part of city life. For instance, the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicate that more than 60% of countries having international business growth, enjoining fruit of modern advancement of technology. Hence, it is apparent that it is beneficial for people and nation as well.
However, there are some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of growing international trade. Primary one lies in the fact that it has adverse effects on environment. Since industries produce a heap of trash which contaminates air, soil and water. Such kind of pollution is a major cause of global warming and pouse threat for living organisms. Therefore, ramification of global companies can not be overlooked.
To conclude, having ponderd over above stated it is crystal clear that despite some drawbacks, benefits of mushrooming international trade are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46973365617 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14470708919 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61985472155 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.641580663 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094068149575 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249629008949 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265597501353 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452949815889 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151303350636 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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