Increasing price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this. What other measures do you think might be effective?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that inclination of fuel price is exact shoot to combat the issue of mushrooming road congestion and pollution, however, others oppose it by saying that it may bring several problems. In my opinion, other alternatives must be used in order to deal with this concern. I would discuss reasons to support my stance. Also, there are some possible measures to prevent the negative consequences of traffic and pollution.
To commence with, there are myriad effects of hiking the price of petrol. Most preponderant one is that if rates of fuel increase, it will effect the lives of common people. Since rising price of petrol would hike the price of goods which are moved from one place to another, as transportation cost will be increased. It cannot only contribute to increase the price of goods, but also leads to numerous other benefits in various fields such as industries will also suffer from this tragic change because industries require a great proportion of fuel to run smoother process. Directly, companies will try to cover their costs by increasing the price of products which will not be a good news for middle class and poverty- stricken masses. For instance, the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicate that 70% factories relayed on petrol, unfortunately they would have to shutdown their business as they will not cover their expenses. Needless to say all these demerits have far-reaching reaching impacts on society.
In my perception, steps to deal with this problem are many, most effective ones are not remote and completed, but accessible and practicable. The primary one lies in the fact that senior authority had better enact stringent rules and regulations to tackle this issue namely; even and odd method, encourage public transportation and good condition of roads. Besides, regime needs to organise awareness camps to educate people about pollution, and stimulate them to use public transport. Only when convergent efforts of all sectors are assured, this obstacle can be overcome. Hence, all needs to join hands to cool this burning issues of traffic and pollution.
To conclude, having ponderd over above stated it is crystal clear that hike in fuel price is not best option to handle the hurdles of road congestion and pollution. Although it can be alleviated by collective effort of both public and government.
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Message: Did you mean 'to shut down'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08495145631 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69256380596 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594660194175 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0515683067 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.388888889 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157036177063 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514385905823 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421325816914 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873429976117 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216045783461 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.