Travelling abroad is regarded as a valuable and good activity for young people,but some people think it takes too much money and time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of masses believing that travelling is a part of education so it has countless importance for young generation while others oppose it by saying that it consumes large proportion of time as well as wastes money. I am in the opinion that first view is more effective, however, this essay would shed light on both sides in following sub-sections.
To commence with, there are deluge of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that commuting overseas is golden opportunity for students to learn various new things about cultures, traditions, etiquettes and values of other nations that will help them to decide their future goals. . It can not only help to reduce discrimination, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields like to improve their communication skills, by doing so they can become versatile personality.Thanks to wide range of advantages it offers, youth can enhance the quality and productivity of their lives with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Since this activity provides platform to get exposure, it does not waste time and money. For instance, study results published by the government of Australia clearly indicate that 70% students who visit another countries, have great deal of information and jobs in reputable compenies which covers the cost of their time and furtune. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead as for agumenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
On the other hand, a section of the society contradicts the above- said view by providing some justification. They reckon that individuals have to invest a great chunk of money to buy ticket, arrange their accommodation, but they completely rely on their parents to manage their expenses. Also, they are no mature enough to understand the value of money which may lead them to spoil their habbits. For example, they spend huge amount of money on clothers and other accessories which make them extravagant. Apart from it, this activity takes too much time, but at this time they should focus on their career rather then travelling. Hence, it is clear, why some are not in favour of this view point.
To conclude, having ponderd over above stated, it is crystal clear that benefits of travelling abroad for pupils are indeed too great to ignore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0290237467 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81299161003 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612137203166 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.6009586346 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.142857143 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0714285714 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169755705917 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577561763336 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396645084724 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10594663379 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337826381128 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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