Many people think living in high rise apartments makes people feel lonely and unhappy. While others argue it has advantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are predominantly two contrasting views where one section of society vehemently deems that people who live in high built flats suffer from loneliness and unhappiness while others reckon that residing in these type of establishments is beneficial. In my profound opinion, living in these apartments makes the life of people more joyful and enhances quality life.
Apparently, various factors makes a section of people advocate that residing in apartments is not joyful and creates stress and have reason to substantiate it. To begin with, dwellers of highly built flat leads a less social life. People living in them are majorly indulged in 9 to 5 jobs which makes their routine hectic, therefore; they are less interactive with the community they live in which considerably leads to stress and sorrow in life. Henceforth, this makes them self-centered and feel bored. For example, in India, revealed people of metro cities are under more stress as compared to those who live in houses or Colonies.
On the other hand, buildings which are highly constructed provides numerous advantages for myriad reasons. Chiefly, by living in them people enjoy many facilities and necessities in vicinity of the area. This is to say that, the individuals who owe flats can avail the services of gym, parks, car parking and swimming pool as contractors of flats provide these things in that area itself. Consequently, it brings contentment and comfort in their lives. According to my perspective, despite one drawback, this phenomenon comes with favourable benefits for individuals and society as well.
In conclusion, eventhough high rise living begets the disadvantage of making a person detached from society, it is significantly beneficial in terms of quality of life and comfortablity. It is recommended that nations should prefer these buildings to save land.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30847457627 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91788608044 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.375325022 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266524830793 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819649193705 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644583987184 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153432405547 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705762037393 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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