Many people think that money promotes happiness. What importance does money have regarding happiness?
Give your anwser with relavant examples.
It is undeniable fact that money plays an essential role in life of mankind. It has been seen that majority of people believe that wealth brings a real pleasure. Following paragraphs will analyse this phenomenon and stat the significance of money in promoting happiness.
To commence with, prosperity gives individuals confidence for living and also they can get leisure time for them selves by hiring people for their boring and tidious work. In addition, people who have deep pockets can spend money on the things and activities they like. Hence, they feel joy in life and find read enjoyment. Moreover, it is worth saying that "Wealth can bring you in a good shape". Who don't like to be in a good health conditions? People can live a quality and healthy life style with prosperity. In addition, they can facilitate them selves with good medical services when required.
Furthermore, it has been seen that people who are earning fair amount for living, are tend to give bacl to the society. In other words, they do charity and give funds to non profitable organizations. Which not make only them happy but also makes the community happy. In the recent survey by "Public Werfare Union" stat that "People who are economically stable are proven to be more successful, as they have no such stress or pressure in mind for the living".
To conclude, I recapitulate tht prosperity plays very crucial role in a happiness of people, as they can utilize their money in many different ways which gives them happiness. Though, it is not the only factor to be considered in bringing pleasure, but certainly it is the prime one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98555956679 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80589266793 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0506659218 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181489396817 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579301211036 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529417682719 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119121676802 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031651263699 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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