Many people think that the most important things in life are free-they cannot be bought. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is a common believe that crucial things in life are not to be paid for. This has given rise to the fervid question 'who pays for them'?. Certain individuals opine that weighty things in life should be unfettered which should not be paid for. I cannot give credence to the proponents of that school of thought because free things are usually mismanaged and requires maintenance and running costs.
To begin with, most unpaid things in life are usually malhandled as a result it does not last. For instance a community pipe borne water installed last year in Gboko local government sploit within 6 months of commisioning the project due to poor management. If the indigenes of the community are asked to pay a for such services, they will understand the importance and probably know how best to handle such amenity.
Furthermore, crucial needs in human life such as hospitals , roads and schools requires running and maintenance cost. While these are important, the government alone cannot handle the expenses incurred. Therefore, individuals should contribute so that they will be enough fund maintain and run the projects. For example, a recent research by the WHO has shown that the government spends millions of dollars yearly in maintaining and running general hospitals. Unless people are asked to pay for certain services, everything might crumble. By and large, it is necessary that individual contributes by paying for certain services so that maintenance and running cost burden on the government can reduce.
To sumup, while quite a number of individuals believe that basic things in life should be free and should not be bought. However, i cannot agree to that school of thought because it can easily be mismanaged and they require maintenance and running costs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, by and large, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11604095563 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7080234821 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532423208191 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4616697044 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21834289474 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076008698077 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651791470705 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150631348507 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786995844172 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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