Many people think that we have to focus on the extinction of certain animal species, while others think that we should pay attention to the problem of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
After World War Two industry and technology revolution released, competitions between nations increased, but without thinking what impacts it might cause to human. All the world is facing environmental issues, many people think that they have to focus on extinction of certain species, others believe that they should pay attention to the problem of humans.
These days people aren’t respecting other creatures, this is leading to extinction. First, the governments need to stop people from killing animals randomly for trading, especially specific creatures; there must be an international law, to follow these traders. Second, there must be organizations to assist and look over certain animals that are facing death danger and extinction. For example, lately in Lebanon, the Ministry of Environment, started organizing the hunting season, publishing awareness campaigns for specific animals; even fining several people that abuse the law. In my opinion, I think that people must follow the rules and think that these species are living creatures like us, we can benefit from not by killing them.
On the other hand, the world is facing high levels of pollution, which is affecting on our lives and leading to death, several people believe they must may attention to these problems. First, human beings should protect their environment from global warming, by reducing fuel emission and use alternative resources, like natural gas, solar system to produce energy, to decrease the damage that ruined the ozone layer. Second, the society should have more knowledge about pollution side effects and how danger is it, they must take care over their resources such as water and forests, to have a healthier life. For example, a new study done by German scientist. Showing that plastic in kids blood increased, due to plastic containers and throwing them in the oceans randomly. In my opinion, I believe we must start solving the problem starting from our homes.
In conclusion, pollution is killing all living creatures in this world and we are assisting in this crime. Therefore, we must pay attention to animals and ourselves, to survive and have a healthy and clean earth.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32853025937 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63542423292 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582132564841 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8383057677 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.266666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286150607747 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879397801729 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911850026582 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180287626247 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693920320398 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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