Many people like to wear fashionable clothes.
Why do you think this is the case?
Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, majority of individuals desire to wear trending and latest designer clothes even though, most of the time are expensive, such a trend is as a result of pressure from advertising companies and people want to look like their role models. This is detrimental to all most especially the youths and local community.
Firstly, advertisements from commercial companies are the main case of people willing to acquire fashionable dresses. In other words, commercials always raise the quality and value of products even though, it might be sub-standard. Fashion companies have the strategy of discounting trending attires, thereby, exerting pressure on consumers most especially, youths to purchase their products.
Secondly, most people want to look like their role models in the entertainment industry. This is especially true among the youths who can go to any length just to dress like their favourite musician or actor. For instance, seventy-percent of teenage girls in the United States wore similar dress as female celebrities around the globe during their first prom night.
The development has a detrimental effect on both individuals especially youths and the society as a whole. That is to say, majority of adolescence squander quite a sum of money just to purchase designers clothes consequentially, indebting themselves. Furthermore, people looks indifferent and therefore, no uniqueness in society. Finally, it damage culture and traditions as future generation no longer uphold unto it.
In conclusion, commercials from advertising companies play a crucial role for people to desire fashionable dresses which have drawbacks both on individuals as well as the community.
Comments
In style clothes have become…
In style clothes have become an integral part of every individual’s life. At the time of every celebration, let it be formal or informal, people prefer clothes with varied trends. This is really a case to study because people are neglecting the traditional presence of artistry in clothing and are rejecting it as a fashion in the modern era.
Famous celebrities do the fashion for the purpose of earning money that eventually influences people to accept it as a clothing style. The culture is different in urban and rural areas. People from rural areas watch TV and to pretend themselves like those characters, they prefer actors’ clothing for those heroic looks.
For men, there are extremely limited styles available in the clothing industry. Men, due to limited quality spend less on clothing and save money. For women, the variety is endless but too costly to purchase. Men prefer to spend less on clothing and more on household things, on a contrary, women spend more on clothes than household purpose. This is a bad thing for anyone because buying new clothes every time for different occasions make less sense as people generally do not wear the same for different celebrations. People should spend more on health rather wasting their earnings on fashionable wears. Undoubtedly, people should understand that looks doesn’t affect their character and hence selecting clothing styles wisely makes a lot of difference. But it doesn’t mean that farmers should not adapt professional attire or professionals should not wear traditional clothes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60311284047 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13001100909 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4565713086 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1538461538 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113153686353 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401010000045 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330253962319 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643919266707 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263222698227 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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