In many places, large chain stores are taking over the marketplace, making it impossible for small businesses to compete with them what are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

Essay topics:

In many places, large chain stores are taking over the marketplace, making it impossible for small businesses to compete with them what are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

The phenomenon of Shopping in hypermarkets has recently spread worldwide. They have attracted many people to buy their needs, but they have made it difficult for small markets to vie with them. Although the public can extremely get a lot of facilities in the grand shops, they also suffer from many drawbacks there that can be avoided in the street markets.

Huge chain markets have regularly made considerable offers which entice many clients whose purchases value are high, and they need to decrease it. Carrefour, for example, has orderly offered sales for home needs every weekend. Moreover, all merchandise that are demanded for shoppers are obtainable in the enormous centers abundantly. Therefore, they promote public to save their time and give them a comfortable sense. Others who are used to going to malls on holidays consider it a picnic, so they frequently take their families there.

However, some generally prefer to get their necessities from the local markets for many reasons. Firstly, when they go to vast supermarkets, they take a long time because of a lot of departments of goods that unfortunately makes a search more complicated and wastes a lot of time. Secondly, some persons usually get higher bills than expect, for the offers of sales have pulled them to buy wares either they are needed or not. Furthermore, purchases decline leads to the release of many employees in the street markets as a consequence of customers’ preference of great centers.

In conclusion, there are both merits and demerits to huge stores that have dominated the market. Despite the fact that they have displayed many positive aspects, they have had many disadvantages that are pushing buyers to small shops.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16725978648 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74283739977 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604982206406 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9387960575 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144563419864 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504298818538 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325233634973 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950905076695 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00517347266323 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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