Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
There is a fact that workers hardly do exercise, and that can lead to some negative impacts on them. In this essay, i will analyze the causes before expressing my own view as well as my solution.
It is difficult for workers to have enough time for working out during the weekday, because most of workers are too busy with their job. The truth is doing exercise can not happen during the time they are working. It is because the breaks are usually too short for them to do anything else except having a drink and relax. Additionally, even when they have free time, they only want to spend that time on relaxing, because they are extremely exhausted and stressed.
To solve that issue, the first measurement is workers should arrange their work-timetable appropriately to create work-life balance. For example, they should have a good morning habit of waking up early, having nutritious breakfast and doing exercise everyday. The second measurement is companies should have more health activities to ensure a good physical status for their staff. For instance, oganising picnic every year such as camping on the mountain or swimming competition is a good idea to bring, that will bring many exciting things for their employees after stressful working time. That is also a motivation for their employees to work effectively.
In conclusion, the lack of doing exercise for workers is a serious issue, therefore they should improve that situation. The reasons they rarely do exercise are they do not have much time to do that and after working time, they feel too tired to do anything. However, the problems can be solved by methods such as doing exercise regularly, and the employers should subsidise their staff on having more outdoor activities
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the workers') or simply say ''most workers''.
Suggestion: most of the workers; most workers
...working out during the weekday, because most of workers are too busy with their job. The truth ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...nutritious breakfast and doing exercise everyday. The second measurement is companies sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96928327645 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57979392507 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5782903462 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267743976574 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100523096996 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521382291746 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155762183954 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672814441783 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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