Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
People have been leading a sedentary lifestyle over the last few years. This essay will explore the factors behind the diminishing popularity of exercising among employees and propose some measures to mitigate this problem.
One reason why working people tend to have less exercising during their regular days and leisure time is the long working hours. This is influential because if a worker spend more than ten hours per day at their workplace in addition to the daily commuting time, they would be so exhausted to participate in any additional activity after work. Besides long working hours, the demanding nature of modern life has resulted in people having extra family and domestic responsibilities. Consequently, this has led people, particularly workers, to give up exercising since they are overwhelmed with enormous work and personal duties.
Nevertheless, these are some procedures that can be adapted by the government and the employers to help workers turn back to exercising. An effective solution could be that governments should legally enforce companies to change their policy regarding long working hours. If organizations reduced the daily working hours for their staff, this would save time and effort for workers, and they might be able to participate in sports in their free time. Another vital solution that employers can provide is to equip the workplace buildings with gym facilities so that workers can exercise during break times. This is of paramount importance for people who work on shift-basis since they frequently spend most of their days inside their workplaces; thus, they tend to have very little room of time to practice any activity after work.
In conclusion, long working hours and immense household responsibilities are two main reasons for people’s sedentary routine. However, this concern could be tackled by imposing laws to reduce working hours and equipping work premises with facilities that allow workers to exercise in their break time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39297124601 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80211911067 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581469648562 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9777262656 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.846153846 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393647469532 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143301078136 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755481611002 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240996198719 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702891881757 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.