Many working people get little or no experience or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
It is a well-known fact that physical activities have been ignored by a majority of people in the world. There are various reasons to explain this phenomenon and in fact, few ideas have been brainstormed in order to tackle this issue.
The first reason to justifyy this trend is people are more focusing on climbing the ladder of career success. In other words, higher position in their firm and the desire of being acknowledged as the best employee seems like a more attractive objectives than having a healthy life style. For example, in Japan, some surveys have been conducted throughout the nation and the result showed that more than 75% of staff voluntarily worked overtime to deliver works. As a result, they spent most of their daily hours in an office without any outdoor activities. Another popular reason is there are many other forms of entertainment which allow people to enjoy in the comfort of their living room. To be more specific, in both developed and developing countries, playing video games or watching Netflix is favored by the blue-collar workforce after a hard working day. As a result, health problem is an inevitable consequence.
Alleviating the problem is difficult but not impossible. Companies should organize certain event which can encourage their employees to exercise more. For example, in some American company, workers are paid to participate in an after hour physical training provided by professional. Moreover, government should pay more attention to constructing new training infrastructures where citizens are able to come and play any sport they love with a reasonable cost.
In conclusion, being occupied in work and distracted by technological entertainments are two of main cause leading to the lack of exercise. Companies and societies must work together to provide more access to people so that they can be engaged more in physical activities, hence reducing the danger of health issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21725239617 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86584140947 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61661341853 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3422028815 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.866666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219709379544 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700866496214 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373123026272 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119917585057 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537745375718 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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