Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?
What is your opinion on that?
Whether or not a more considerable number of women should be involved in high-level jobs has always been a matter of vigorous debates. Some people are in favour of the idea, whereas others tend to contradict them. I am inclined to concur for the former, which will be elaborated in this essay.
To begin with, men's holding the majority of high-rank positions seems to lead to a biased decision taken in every aspect of people's lives. Women and men appear to be predisposed to diverge in their stances on numerous topics. In this respect, more women in empowered positions may lead to more holistic approaches solving various issues. Secondly, men are known to suffer temper problems more often, which, at times, might result in terrible wars, tyranny and oppression. Finally, there are always matters which men can hardly conceive, rendering unilateral decisions made by men extremely irrational. For instance, proper regulations in the realm of maternity seem to be rather impossible when no women are admitted to the legislature.
On the contrary, some people claim that women tend to be more sentimental and indulgent. Such people claim that employment of methods including a certain level of threatening and cruelty is a pure necessity holding jobs of high stature and women are innately incapable of this. Others, bound by strict upbringing or religious believes, reckon that women by nature should never rule over men and thus should be kept as far from power as possible.
All in all, although possible weaknesses of women are cited and certain prejudices still prevail in some countries, I would say that holistic view on the situations are vital and therefore women should never be excluded from these jobs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... women are admitted to the legislature. On the contrary, some people claim that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13074204947 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66312033458 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621908127208 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.229899657 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277761241639 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911846581407 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568757711757 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169467830387 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240504576024 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.