mobile phones are becoming much popular these days , but some people think that mobile phones have given social and medical problems.
Do you think advantages of mobile phones over weigh disadvantages ?
The contemporary world authenticates the increasing significance of using mobile phones. Usage of mobile phones in past few years has proved that each and every individual is using these gadgets . It has not only changed the methods of interaction among people but also added to many kinds of social as well medical conditions such as weak eyesight, depression and detachment from surroundings .
To initiate with, there are multifarious wonderful upsides of using mobile phones. Firstly, mobile phone has converted the whole world into a global village. We can communicate with anyone sitting thousands of miles away from us . Other features like video calling enables us to do a conversation face to face. Secondly, it has given birth to many online courses .Coaching classes can be joined by just clicking on the phone. Students can acquire information by sitting at their homes.
On the flip side, it is undeniable fact that cell phones have given us many benefits but the downsides of the same cannot be ignored. These kinds of gadgets have cut the youngsters off from their families . They spend a plethora of time on phones. This give rise to less activities. They prone to many illnesses like obesity, poor mental health. Some young people are so connected to mobiles and social media that they commit suicide because of getting hurt from somebody. Excessive usage of cellphones cause strain on eyes and can damage the eyes.As a recent incident that has happened with two Japanese ladies , who lost their eyesight because of using mobile phone till midnight.
Laconically, it can be inferred that mobile phones have adverse effects but no one can afford turning face from their merits. Despite from having demerits , they are useful in a lot of fields. So, if their use is limited , they can prove to be beneficial to humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04605263158 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60660865109 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628289473684 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.909944366 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7368421053 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242270034784 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701577951164 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644037406515 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156048520443 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343017663487 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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