Mobile phones have made life easier and anyone can use a mobile phone to answer or make work calls or home calls art any place 7 days a week. Do you think this development has more positive effects or negative effects on the individual and the society?
The evolution of latest technologies changed the face of communication medias. Emergence of mobile phones in the society produced an easier way of life. However, these development have more positive than its manageable negative impacts.
To begin with, usage of cellular phones are tremendously increased among the society and made their life or work more feasible. The evolvement of mobile phones helps the human to communicate among them around the world at any time conveniently rather than writing a letter or sending telegram or fax. For example, contacting a person who is living in far places will take days or a week to reach them if contacted by post or Telegram, whereas with the innovation of new technology in communication, the use of mobile phones of satellite phones can be used interact instantly irrespective of geographical locations.
Secondly, development of smartphones changed the picture of mobile phone by introducing various applications for communication such as whatsapp, facebook and so on. These applications use the internet and provides calling facility over voice and video. To clarify, sailors uses satellite communication to call their dear ones during sailing and moreover it is not affordable. Newly developed calling apps uses the internet which is much cheaper and provides video and audio calling facilities.
However, there are chances of misusing the mobile phone by spreading wrong news during conflicts and helps terrorists and other extremists to make a breach in the security information by hacking the devices.
In conclusion, civilians increasingly use the mobile phones for their day to day communication and it has greater advantages for them. Although there are certain manageable disadvantages, the advantages far outweigh the its certain drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: of the latest
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Suggestion: the; its
...advantages, the advantages far outweigh the its certain drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56115107914 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07995391898 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607913669065 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5224416385 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340844981924 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110099438705 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627105912454 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167182900767 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573398014124 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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